THE
PHANTOM MENACE ANALYSIS

So
why is it that this film gets criticized
so negatively? Where did George Lucas
go wrong? Did he go wrong?
In part, yes, and in part, no.
Part
of the reason this film got bashed by
so many Star Wars fans was because of
the fact that it was massively over-hyped.
Think back to November 1998, when the
first trailer for Star Wars Episode
I: The Phantom Menace premiered.
People paid full admission
price to a movie they did not care about,
just to see this trailer. This movie
was that important. One might
remember that once the trailer hit theaters,
one could not go to any public place
without seeing some sort of ad for the
film. Whether it would be cardboard
stand-ups featuring the characters from
the new film, massive banners in the
theater, or book stores putting new
Phantom Menace books out on
display near the store's entrance, etc.
- the film was everywhere. Of course,
one cannot forget the KFC, Taco Bell
and Pizza Hut adds on TV that advertised
their toys and posters from the film.
This is but a taste of the huge hype-machine
known as The Phantom Menace
(from this point on, the film will be
referred to as "TPM"). Sure,
Lucas endorsed the advertising. Some
of it was poorly done, or overly done.
But it was really the media and the
fans that over-hyped it, as they built
it up to be some sort of spiritual awakening,
when really it was just another movie.
People
could not get enough of the hype, as
was apparant with the rampant TPM toy
craze that occurred when the new action
figures for the film were released in
early May 1999. This film was a movie
destined to fail in one way, and succeed
in another. It failed to live up to
the public's ridiculously over-hyped
expectations and preconceived notions,
as fans of the original trilogy had
been waiting for a new Star Wars
film for 16 years. They had been imagining
what the prequels would be like ever
since Lucas announced back in the 1980s
that he would go back and tell the story
of how Darth Vader and the Empire were
birthed into existence. Nevertheless,
the film did succeed at the box office,
despite the media trying to convince
the public otherwise. Millions went
and saw it again and again, which gave
the appearance that most liked the movie
quite a bit. Usually people go see a
movie more than once because they liked
it.
So
where did all the disappointment come
from? Part of it has to do with the
fact that Lucas was a bit rusty in his
ability to make a film and know his
audience. He was under the impression
that kids were his prime audience, thus
he included many kiddy-friendly things
in TPM, such as Jar Jar Binks. It is
true that kids are one main
audience, but they do not make up the
majority. Who did he think would be
out late and lining up to the very first
midnight screening of the film anyway?
Little kids? No, it is true that most
of Lucas's fans are young adults - and
they are the ones that are the most
vocal.
The
other part of the disappointment is
that this movie was the most
anticipated movie of all time. Star
Wars is the biggest movie franchise
ever to be conceived, and so it was
inevitable that no matter what, people
would criticize this film - even without
Jar Jar. People went and saw it, being
excited just to see a new Star Wars
film on screen. People generally liked
it. But, as time passed by, and the
idiotic media criticized it, people
started getting influenced by the dark
side. The brain-washing techniques of
the media have great influence on the
weak-minded.
But,
not all the problems lie with the media.
Young adults in and of themselves just
tend to be quite cynical these days.
For example, they criticize modern CGI
effects as if they are bad, when in
fact they are light years ahead of the
way it used to be, with stop-frame animation,
matte paintings, etc. All one needs
to do is watch about ten hours of old
Flash Gordon serials from the
1930s and 40s (which was one of the
influences of Star Wars), as
well as a few other cheesy 1950s sci-fi
films, and one can clearly see just
how good we have it with modern special
effects today. [On a side note, they
still use much of the old technology,
such as model-making, prosthetics, etc.
In TPM, Lucas integrated much of both
CGI and old film-making techniques.
Even models were used quite extensively
througout the prequels, with at least
1,000 or so per film.]
With
TPM, young adults are overly jaded about
the most ridiculous things. For instance,
yes Jar Jar Binks did not work for them,
and I do not blame them, as he did not
work well for me either. But it seems
that because the character was featured
so prominently in the film and he was
so annoyingly goofy, that people failed
to objectively look at the rest of the
film and how cleverly put together it
was. They find one bad thing in it,
and so the rest of the movie becomes
obscelete. "How wude." Either
that, or things that are good are perceived
as bad because they could not get over
the other kiddy-friendly aspects of
the film.
Yes,
I believe that Jar Jar was the sinking
ship in this otherwise astounding film.
He was a good idea, but he ultimately
did not work for most people. But neither
he, nor George Lucas are the primary
cause of the let down. It is a combination
of jaded, brain-dead youth, and the
media being able to brain-wash the brain-dead.
Those people let Jar Jar ruin
the rest of what would otherwise be
a good film. Sure, he was borderline
ridiculous, but he did not cross
the line. Therefore, it still is possible
to like this film if we just objectively
look at what else is in there. I think
one will find more good in the film
than bad, if one just blanks out the
bad to begin with. The film goes from
a "crap" or "bomb"
rating to 2 1/2 or 3 stars easily, which
constitues it being a decent film.
So,
in this analysis, we'll look at what
worked, what did not work, and what
people thought did not work
but actually did. I think the majority
of the film works well as far as the
story and action is concerned. And,
now that the saga has been completed
with the release of Star Wars Episode
III: Revenge of the Sith, one should
be able to go back and watch TPM through
the rose-coloured filter of Revenge,
and see that TPM's story is brilliant.
Let us first provide responses to the
complaints commonly associated with
the film:
1)
"Jar Jar Binks ruined the film."
Let
us get this guy out of the way. Jar
Jar Binks, while a creative and innovative
idea, ultimately did not work well.
Why? Probably because his speech was
too indecipherable, he was too
goofy and annoying, and there was too
much of him. If one recalls Star
Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones,
his character was ultilized much better
there, as they toned down everything
about Jar Jar that got on the nerves
of die-hard Yoda-heads back in 1999,
and there was less of him. I do not
hear anyone complaining about Jar Jar
ruining that film (although
they have other complaints, which are
mostly ridiculous).
Jar
Jar's speech, and the way he always
seemed to get in the way really annoyed
viewers as well. Kids related to him
because he acted just like kids. Kids
are great, but they can annoy heavily,
cause many accidents and get in the
way - just like Jar Jar. This drives
youth and adults crazy. So, to have
a two hour Star Wars film consist
of approximately one and a half hours
of Jar Jar being goofy, causing accidents
and speaking nonsensically just drove
older viewers mad. This makes sense,
especially since none of the other films
have a character like Jar Jar in it,
and they worked just fine for people
of all ages. If there was less
of him in TPM like there was in Attack
of the Clones, that would at least
be tolerable, even if he is not as grown
up as he is in Clones.
Either
that, or just make the humor more witty
and clever, and not so idiotic. For
example, when he is in the battlefield,
have him pick up a gun from a defeated
battle-droid and try to use it, instead
of him bumbling around making a farce
out of the whole thing. There are quite
a few clever comedic possibilites there
that would not be quite as goofy and
cartoony, yet would preserve the idea
that he is clumsy. Then, have him actually
figure out how to use the gun after
screwing it up a couple times. This
would make him still funny, but yet
he would take his first step in maturity
as the General he was just declared
to be by Boss Nass. I would love to
see Jar Jar kick some butt with a gun.
I think people in general would have
loved his character then. Have him mature
within this film, rather than
in the 10 years between Episodes I and
II. Show us his growth.
The
other part that people criticize is
the look of Jar Jar. I think
those criticisms are invalid for the
most part. What happened with TPM was
that Lucas is a techy who loves to experiment
- particularly with special effects.
So when the idea of digital characters
came along, he could not pass it up.
He really could not pass it
up, so much so that he decided that
he wanted a digital character to be
a main character who tags along
with the good guys. We now know that
this can work brilliantly, as The
Lord of the Rings trilogy created
the character of "Gollum"
who worked on every level. Of course,
the special effects were better for
him than for Jar Jar, since Gollum was
created a few years after Jar Jar was.
But Jar Jar was still very photo-realistic
with the way he sat in space and time.
Light and shadow, as well as the other
real characters in the film interacted
with him quite well. His skin texture
was well-rendered too. The problem lies
not with his look, but rather
with his movements and his speech. He
moved and talked too
much like something off of the Cartoon
Network. His look had nothing to do
with his being cartoony. Our minds tend
to play tricks on us like this from
time to time and we need to learn how
to recognize when our mind does this.
He looked real. He just did not feel
real.
I
still have to give Jar Jar credit. He
is the classic wise fool who accomplishes
something great. He unites the two segregated
societies on Naboo. Jar Jar deserves
his rank as General as far as this is
concerned. His heart is pure and innocent,
and he just wants to help out. We cannot
honestly hate him for that, unless we
ourselves are heartless. So since Jar
Jar is in the film, and there is nothing
we can do about it, let us ignore what
did not work and focus in on this character's
heart. He really is somewhat likable,
even if his antics are not.
Like
what was said before, Jar was the sinking
ship in this film. But the audience
does have the abilities to
plug the holes that are causing that
ship to sink. After all, why let one
thing ruin the most anticipated film
of all time, especially since he was
not a total loss to the plot?
2)
"The plot sucks."
The
first question I ask people who say
this is, "Why?" Usually they
cannot even tell me what it is about,
let alone give an explanation as to
why they would say such a thing. That
is partially Lucas's fault, but it is
mostly the audience's. And, because
the audience did not understand it,
they wrote it off saying that it does
not compare to the originals.
I
say otherwise. Sure, audiences could
understand the surface story with Anakin
Skywalker and the Trade Federation.
But the idea of the Trade Federation
being the evil presence in the movie
did not seem very threatening, as "these
Trade Federation types are cowards,"
as Qui-Gon Jinn once said. The "taxation
of trade routes" just sounds boring
and makes audience members scratch their
heads. What does this have to do with
Darth Vader, the Jedi becoming extinct
or the birth of the Empire?
It
also upset people that the Sith Lord
Darth Maul, who was pictured on just
about every marketing campaign for the
film, was not in the movie for any more
than about five minutes. Why not have
him in it more, since he was so cool?
Everyone loved the double-bladed lightsaber,
and simply wanted to see more of it.

The
problem was that people could not sense
the impending evil that was underneath
it all: Darth Maul's master, Darth Sidious.
People like their villians out in the
open, not plotting behind closed doors
where we cannot see them. They
need an evil personality to
connect to. Sure, he was in the film
briefly. We see him dictating to Darth
Maul what to do occasionally. But ultimately,
he remains "elsewhere; elusive"
as Obi-Wan senses in the beginning of
the film. This is fine, but we the audience
should have been let in on some
of the elusiveness. This would work,
just so long as the characters are not
let in on it. I do not mean
that we should see everything Darth
Sidious says and does, but just a couple
scenes more of him and Maul plotting.
That is it. It would make all the difference
in the world. And Sidious's identity
could still be hidden the entire time,
making him still elusive and phantom-like.
Yes,
Darth Sidious is "the phantom menace."
Because Darth Maul was plastered everywhere
with every ad for the film, people thought
he was the phantom. Darth
Sidious is the one acting like
a phantom and being a menace to the
galaxy. But the surface story of finding
Anakin and defeating the Trade Federation
does not really show this yet, except
that Sidious was controlling the Federation.
So what? What does that have to do with
anything? Why is it interesting?
The
trick is that the Senator from Queen
Amidala's planet of Naboo, Senator Palpatine,
is the same person as Darth Sidious.
Of course, with the release of Revenge
of the Sith, everyone knows this.
But many did not at the time of TPM's
release, therefore they missed out on
why the film was titled "The Phantom
Menace" in the first place, thus
they thought the plot was dumb. Many
have since avoided this film ever since
they saw it, failing to realize that
they may gain a different perspective
on the plot, now that they have seen
Revenge of the Sith. If they
would just watch TPM again, after seeing
Revenge, they would be thinking
more about what Palpatine's doing, rather
than everyone else, thus seeing the
film's plot for what it really is: Genius.
Palpatine
is playing both sides of the game throughout
the entire prequel trilogy. In TPM,
he is the Senator from Naboo, whose
planet is being invaded by the Trade
Federation. But, since he is also Darth
Sidious, he is the one who
commanded the invasion to take place.
So, he is invading his own home planet.
Why on Earth (or should I say, "Naboo")
would he do that? Because he wants to
gain sympathy in the Senate so that
when they see that the current Chancellor,
Chancellor Valorum, is just delaying
and not resolving the issue at hand,
they will want to vote him out and choose
someone else for the role of
Chancellor (which is President of the
Universe, basically) who they think
will solve it better. Who else would
be better to solve it than the very
person whose planet is being invaded?
Thus, by the end of the film, Palpatine
has become Chancellor. This is great
writing here, folks.
With
this new power, he has the ability to
manipulate the system however he wants,
as we see throughout the course of the
prequels. In Attack of the Clones,
he has Count Dooku create a Clone Army
that starts a war with the Separatists,
which in turn allows Palpatine to stay
in office longer than his term would
normally allow. And, in Revenge
of the Sith, he uses his power
and the war to set up the Jedi, making
them look evil, therefore justifying
their extermination and the birth of
his evil Empire. The Sith now rule the
galaxy. But none of this would have
happened without his ingenious manipulation
of both sides in TPM. He never would
have been in power.
So,
the story appears much more involved
when taken in the context of the entire
saga. People are just so dim-witted
these days that they fail to realize
just how wonderful the plot of TPM really
is. All they saw was the finding of
Anakin, and the defeat of the Trade
Federation, but failed to see the importance
of it all. One cannot know why the Trade
Federation was so important unless one
looks at the rest of the saga. These
films are meant to work as one creative
piece split into six episodes. And TPM
is a great introduction that sets all
the pieces into place. Yes, the movie
is goofy and too kiddy at times. But
the plot is significant and well-written
nonetheless, and it is worth noting.
It is not bad just because the movie
is kiddy at times.
3)
"Why did Lucas make this
film so light, and not dark like the
originals?"
First
of all, who is anyone to say what the
Star Wars saga should be like? Who ever
said that the Star Wars movies always
have to have a dark overtone to them?
Ultimately, it's George's call.
Secondly,
in Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope
when Ben Kenobi is talking to Luke about
the times when the Jedi were the "guardians
of peace and justice of the Old Republic,"
he said it was "before the dark
times...before the Empire." Now
when he states this, he's specifically
implying that there was a time in the
Star Wars saga which was not that dark.
Now, if he would have said "before
the darker
times," or "before the darkest
times," I'd give in to this argument
because then Kenobi is implying that
the time of the Old Republic was still
a dark time. Therefore, declaring that
these six movies should all be dark.
But, that's not what he said. In TPM,
were only being shown the more peaceful
and light time in the Star Wars saga
(even though there are some bad political
issues going on). In A New Hope,
Old Ben Kenobi is implying that there
was a more light and peaceful time,
and here it is - right in front of us.
4)
"The midi-chlorians ruin the mystical
aspect of the Force. Now, instead of
it being an energy field created by
all living things, it's the cells in
our blood."
Repeat
after me: THE MIDI-CHLORIANS ARE NOT
THE FORCE!
"Midi-chlorians
are a microscopic life form that resides
within all living cells... We are
symbionts with them... Without the
midi-chlorians, life could not exist,
and we would have no knowledge of
the Force. They continually speak
to us, telling us the will of the
Force."
- Qui-Gon Jinn
Qui-Gon
never says that the midi-chlorians are
the Force. And he does not say they
create the Force either. They
only serve as a way of communication
between people, and the Force. This
explains much better why there are only
certain people who have Jedi potential.
It does not take away from the mystical
aspect of the Force. The Force is still
the same thing we've grown to love.
We can all still use it. It's just that
now we know why certain people have
Jedi potential, and why others do not.
Jedi simply have more midi-chlorians.
"But
then this means that no one but the
people who have a high midi-chlorian
count can be Jedi. I liked it better
that anyone could become one if they
put enough effort into it."
Not
everyone can do everything. Can anyone
do that human pretzel act like those
people in the side show at the circus?
No, but yet we accept it. Can anyone
be a born genius? No, but we accept
this too.
This
argument begs another question: When
does the old trilogy imply that anyone
could become a Jedi? To me, it seemed
like becoming a Jedi was Luke's destiny.
Destiny seems to play a big part in
the original movies, not only with Luke
but with other characters as well. The
midi-chlorians only emphasize this.
The
midi-chlorian concept works well because
of the fact that people start training
to become Jedi when they are very young.
I am not sure as to what exact age this
is, but the 9 year-old Anakin in TPM
was declared too old, so it has to be
younger than that. My guess is at around
4-6 years old.
The
point that I am trying to make is this:
What mother would let their kid go and
train to become a Jedi at such a young
age unless it was inevitable that it
is the kid's destiny? What kid at that
age would be able to make an intellegent
decision about how the rest of his/her
life should be? What mother or father
would even think that the kid
knows what's best for his/her life?
None. But because of the midi-chlorians,
the parents can accept that it's their
child's destiny, therefore they will
let he/she go pretty much without question,
just like what happened with Anakin
in TPM.
Since
the old trilogy, it has always been
implied that the Jedi were supposed
to be trained at a young age because
Luke was in his late teens and was told
that he was too old. Yes, "young"
could have meant around 16 years old
in the old trilogy. But even at this
age, parents still would not agree that
one could make a decision of such epic
proportions intellegently.
The
midi-chlorians prove to be a better
method of identifying Jedi hopefuls,
than to have tryouts from all corners
of the entire galaxy, lined up from
the Jedi Temple doors to the end of
the universe! The midi-chlorians make
becoming a Jedi a practical reality.
5)
"Those battle droids are stupid!"
There
are many reasons one can think of as
to why this is. But I will tell you
what I think.
The
battle droids are dumb. They cannot
make good enough decisions. "Um...wait...um...that
doesn't compute...uh wait uh...Your
under arrest!" They can't process
information like humans or other creatures
in the Star Wars galaxy can. This gives
Darth Sidious a clue later down the
road that he should maybe use humans
instead of droids because people can
think more intelligently. So he decides
to create the Storm Trooper armies which
consist of clones in Episodes II and
III. This also gives us the feeling
that by the time of the old trilogy,
things are more advanced.
6)
"The Pod Race is stupid!"

These
complaints are stupid. But I will humor
the brain-dead audiences anyway.
The
pod race is in the movie primarily for
two reasons. The first reason is because
it emphasizes Anakin's hightened force
abilities. In the film, Anakin exclaims,
"I'm the only human who can do
it." No other human being can fly
a pod racer, which makes Anakin unique.
It proves to Qui-Gon that he was right
in sensing that Anakin is not your typical
human being. Based on this, and the
fact that he was conceived by the midi-chlorians
(which lines up very nicely with the
prophecy of the one who will bring balance
to the force), Qui-Gon Jinn now has
no doubt in his mind that Anakin must
be trained as a Jedi.
The
other reason is for entertainment purposes.
People felt it was pointless to have
it in there, but it is an exciting action
sequence that not only is fun to watch,
but also conveys Anakin's abilities
visually. Sure, George Lucas looks for
excuses to toy around with digital effects.
But at least this excuse is a good one.
Perhaps it could have been shorter,
but ultimately it had a valid purpose
for being there.
(I
will say that it did get too goofy at
times. But overall it was an amazing
sequence).
7)
"It had bad acting."
It
is permissable to say that Jake Lloyd's
performance as Anakin was not exactly
riveting. But, in the context of who
his character was, his performance was
spot on. He conveyed exactly was one
would expect if one would find a boy
who is supposed to be innocent, and
knows nothing of greed, and who is,
above all things, a normal kid. He acted
just like one. I think some kids in
film are too grown up. It is more realistic
when a kid in a film actually acts like
one.
I
will admit that some of the dialogue
given to Lloyd was abysmal.
"Hey!
Let's try spinning! That's a good
trick! WOOOOAAAAHHH!"
"Sand storms are very.....VERY
dangerous."
"I'm trying to stop! I'm trying
to stop!"
"It wasn't my fault, REALLY!"
But
this is very minute. He kept his cool
during the rest of the tatooine scenes,
particularly in the Pod Race. He was
almost spooky with how he maintained
control of his pod the entire time.
The
Jedi, particularly Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan,
have been said to have been boring and
emotionless, and the dialogue worthless.
But keep in mind that these are Jedi
Knights, who are to show no emotion
and to have the most serious mind. They
are supposed to be this way. Look at
Luke Skywalker in Return of the
Jedi, and how he was very calm
and emotionless as a Jedi. His emotion
comes out when he fights Vader, but
that is to be expected, since he did
not train in the Jedi order like Obi-Wan
and Qui-Gon did. They were more experienced
Jedi Knights, capable of restraining
most of their emotions. But we do
see that Obi-Wan was quite broken up
about Qui-Gon dying. Obi-Wan was in
tears. And we also know that he was
quite broken up about Anakin turning
to the darkside in Revenge of the
Sith. There simply just were not
that many emotional circumstances for
the Jedi to deal with in TPM. Maybe
there should have been more. But Liam
Neesen and Ewan McGregor acted just
like how Jedi Knights should act. As
far as dialogue is concerned, well,
they are not supposed to have emotional
attachments. They are very anti-social
people, so one should not expect for
their dialogue to be perfect.
Queen
Amidala has been accused of the same
boring, monotone dialogue. But she has
to keep her cool when addressing her
people and their politics. She also
kept her speech very simple and monotone
so that her decoys could mimic her voice
more easily. So, it works. Whether one
likes this or not, that is a matter
of personal taste, just like the trait
of Anakin actually acting like a kid,
or the Jedi Knights being boring. The
actors acted just like what the characters
were supposed to be, and so if one does
not like it, then go watch something
else.
One
must not forget that the original trilogy
had bad dialogue in it as well. It was
fitting for the characters, but nonetheless
bad - particularly with Luke in Star
Wars Episode IV: A New Hope, when
he whines and whines (particularly about
power converters and wanting to go to
the academy), as well as the dialogue
between Han and Leia in Star Wars
Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back.
Of course, those who disagree will say
to me, "I don't know where you
get your delusions, laser-brain."
Do people really talk like this?
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Aside
from the above rebuttals, this film
has a lot to offer. One cannot deny
that the lightsaber battle with Obi-Wan
and Qui-Gon against Darth Maul was the
best lightsaber battle in a Star Wars
film up until Revenge of the Sith.
That, and Maul's double-bladed lightsaber
was a brilliant idea. I, like most people,
wanted more of Darth Maul. But what
we did get was awesome.
The
special efffects are top notch, especially
with the new planets we go to. Naboo
and Coruscant are awesome sights to
behold. Coruscant is realistically dizzying
to look at when staring into its abyss
of skyscrapers.
We
also get to see the Jedi in their prime.
The opening sequence with Qui-Gon and
Obi-Wan fighting on the Trade Federation
ship is still quite entertaining. Also,
it is the only sequence in the entire
saga where we see Jedi use the "force-run,"
where they run at an excelerated speed.
I wish they would have implemented this
into the rest of the saga.
The
underwater city of Otah Gunga where
the Gungas live is truly spectacular.
Some people say they do not like it,
but I gather that this is mostly because
they do not like the gungans themselves.
There is nothing wrong with the look
of the city itself, nor with the creatures
that inhabit its surroundings. I found
this to be one of the most breath-taking
locations we go to, even if the scene
is a bit long.
It
is not a bad film, except in the eyes
of people who fail to look beyond what
they did not like. Sure, it has its
flaws. It desperately needed a character
like Han Solo, or a wittier Jar Jar
- different enough from Han to make
him unique, but also not so cartoony
like Jar Jar. The original trilogy did
not need a Jar Jar type character for
kids to like it, so the new ones did
not need this type of character either.
As we clearly can see with Attack
of the Clones and Revenge of
the Sith, the saga is just better
without him. But TPM does not become
a bad film because of him. Jar Jar just
instigated the distain of things that
are not really bad.
Another
things that Lucas should have added
was human troops fighting alongside
the gungans in the ground battle. Sure,
there were dead gungans in the background,
but to see humans get shot and die hits
closer to home. Lucas also should have
had the Han Solo-type character in there
or, like what was said before, made
Jar Jar more witty and clever. Then
have him die. We would have then built
a connection to someone we like, and
mourned for his death in the field.
The ground battle in TPM is completely
lifeless. Amusing to watch, but it lacks
two elements that makes a war intriguing
- humanity and the death of a loved
character.
All
in all though, TPM is a much better
film than people give it credit for.
Is it flawed? Yes. Is it a bad movie?
No. It is upsetting when people find
one or two things they did not ilke,
and they discredit the rest of the film,
even if the rest of the film is good.
Because of those bad things, whatever
is good becomes bad anyway.
People should try to filter out what
immediately did not work for them in
the film, and look at the good and see
if it comes out on top. TPM, I believe,
comes out on top. It is goofy, and at
times it is annoying. But ultimately
the plot and how it fits into the rest
of the saga works brilliantly, and some
things people thought were bad are really
not.